Critique one: 

Interpretation: The audience interpret correctly of the egg face being eaten by a human

Evaluation: The Audience suggested that the human eating the egg face should of been in the picture as well as showing the pictures of the people in the back ground watching the egg face get eaten.

Print Suggestion:There was no print suggestion for the portrait.

Critique two:

Composition: The composition was cropped to make the image a lot smaller and to make the pictures fit into a collage.

Concept/aboutness/ideas: I had the idea of creating a narrative of a egg face made at a restaurant be eaten by someone else. I thought that this would be a great way to get the audiences attention. The idea and what motivated me was from being at the restaurant and coming up with the idea of decoration my plate and making it into a figure.

 Portrait is about socialism and destruction

Critique one

Interpretation: The audience interpreted this image as a little boy looking through a hole or camera

Evaluation: The audience thought that the image was very clear and that the color was exellent very readable

Print Suggestion:There were no print suggestion from the audience

 

Critique two

Composition: The composition was cropped to get the other figures out of the portrait so the baby can be the main focus.

Concept/aboutness/ideas: This picture was about a portrait of a baby. I wanted to create this because there are not as many perfect baby portraits out there. The idea was from the original plan of doing the narrative of a baby's first Christmas.

 motivation: What motivated me to take this portrait was the fact that it was the baby first Christmas and he needed Christmas pictures.

Portrait is about socialism and the diversity of the different cultures of young human beings.

Critique one

Interpretation: Th class interpreted that the picture was about a Christmas tree.

Evaluation: They suggested that the baby should be more brighter around the edges to make the image more clear of a being viewing the baby and his first Christmas.

Print Suggestion: Make the baby more brighter and clearer.

 

Critique two

Composition: The composition was cropped to get the baby to be more clearer and to be the main focus.

Concept/aboutness/ideas: The concept of the idea was to portray a narrative of the baby having his first Christmas. I came up with this idea because the baby needed Christmas pictures

 motivation:What motivated me to take these pictures and to do the editing was to show the baby being the main focus and to brighten and highlight the most important part.

Portrait is about culturism and diversity.

Critique one

Interpretation:The class interpreted that the picture was a portrait of a baby.

Evaluation: They suggested that the baby should be more brighter but the clarity was good withing the picture.

print Suggestion: Make the baby more brighter and clearer.

 

Critique two

Composition: The composition was cropped to get the baby to be more clearer and to be the main focus. The back ground was adding to much to the picture making it too dark with the white cloth around the baby.

Concept/aboutness/ideas: The concept of the idea was to portray a narrative of the baby having his first Christmas and being born. I came up with this idea because the baby needed Christmas pictures from his family

 motivation:What motivated me to take these pictures and to do the editing was to show the baby being the main focus and to brighten and highlight the most important part as well as taking out the back ground.